Jaws theme, eh? Looking at that last panel, I'd say you're spot-on. Wouldn't surprise me if Kakashi had a genjutsu that could pipe menacing and/or dramatic soundtracks into the minds/ears of enemies . . . or moody Uchiha teammates, lol.
I cant get enough of you drawing Obito. I really love it. A lot of people aren't able to make him actually look like he is from the anime/manga but you are. He looks not too evil, but still like himself. I will forever droll after your drawing! Also I really enjoy the story so far. He is not out of character etc. Its really believable how he acts and how he treats people. You can still see the "little" Obito in it, but also that he has grown up. Man, I really enjoy this